【DSE英文寫作攻略】Article格式全教學：DSE 寫作技巧 + 實戰範例

你以為寫 Article 格式可以自由發揮？大錯特錯！

「見到 Article 就鬆一口氣？小心中伏！」

很多同學一見到 DSE English Paper 2 出現 “Write an article…”，就以為可以輕鬆自由發揮，想寫什麼就寫什麼。但現實是DSE Article 格式暗藏玄機，很多同學因為不懂Article 格式的潛規則而白白失分！如果你有以下任何一個疑問，這篇文章就最適合你：

🤔 「Article 格式跟 Letter、Proposal 有什麼不同？」
🤔 「DSE Article 格式要不要寫 Subheading？」
🤔 「怎樣才可以寫個吸引的 Title？」
🤔 「Introduction 怎樣開頭才夠吸引？」
🤔 「Body Paragraphs 要怎樣組織才清晰？」
🤔 「Conclusion 怎樣寫才夠有力？」

📚 這篇 Article 格式攻略會教你：

✨ 完整 DSE Article 格式結構 – Title、Subheading、Introduction、Body、Conclusion 缺一不可

✨ 每個部分的寫作技巧 – 附有✅優秀範例 vs ❌失敗範例對比，一看就明！

✨ 2016 DSE Past paper完整範例 – 完整展示怎樣運用所有英文 Article 格式元素！

✨ 常見錯誤警示 – 避開考生最容易中的伏位！

✨ 高分貼士總結 – 考試實戰策略，助你穩奪佳績！

🎯 準備好掌握 DSE Article 格式，在英文Paper 2 考場上發揮最佳水平了嗎？不要再靠估、靠運氣！跟著這篇攻略，一步步學懂怎樣寫出高分和正確的Article 格式。

DSE Article 格式基本結構

一篇完整的Article 格式應該包括以下部分。無論是Feature Article 格式還是一般的DSE Article 格式，這些元素都是必備的：

Title 標題

• 要吸引讀者注意
• 簡潔有力，概括文章主題
• 可以用疑問句、驚嘆句或陳述句

 

Article 格式標題範例：

• ✅ Why Workplace Communication is the Key to Mastering English
• ✅ Three Reasons to Learn English Through Real Work Experience
• ✅ Transform Your English: The Power of Workplace Learning

 

Subheading 副標題

• 補充說明標題
• 提供更多背景資訊
• 讓英文 Article 格式更專業

 

Article 格式副標題範例：

• Three compelling reasons every student should know
• How real-world experience beats textbook learning

 

Introduction 引言段

• 引起讀者興趣
• 點出文章主題
• 說明寫作目的

 

Body Paragraphs 主體段落

• 詳細論述你的觀點
• 提供例子、理據、數據
• 每個論點獨立成段

 

Conclusion 總結段

• 總結全文重點
• 呼籲讀者思考或行動
• 留下深刻印象

 

DSE Article 格式 Checklist

在開始寫Article之前，用這份article 格式清單檢查你是否準備充足：

✅ 格式檢查（DSE Article 格式必備元素）

• 我的文章有吸引人的 Title 嗎？
• 我有加 Subheading 讓結構更清晰嗎？
• Introduction 有成功引起讀者興趣嗎？
• 每個 Body Paragraph 都有清晰的主題句嗎？
• Conclusion 有總結重點並留下深刻印象嗎？

 

✅ 語言檢查

• 我使用了適合英文 Article 格式的語氣嗎？（親切但專業）
• 我使用了適當的連接詞嗎？（Firstly, Moreover, Furthermore等）
• 我的句子結構有變化嗎？
• 我有檢查文法和拼寫錯誤嗎？

 

Article 格式 Title & Subheading 寫法

 

Article 格式 Title 寫作技巧

一個出色的DSE Article 格式 Title 應該：

✅ 吸引眼球 – 讓讀者想繼續看下去
✅ 清楚主題 – 一看就知道文章講什麼
✅ 簡潔有力 – 通常8-12個字最理想
✅ 可以使用修辭手法 – 問句、感嘆句、對比等

Title 寫法公式：

公式1：疑問句式

• Why + [主題] + is/are + [形容詞]?
• How can + [方法] + help you + [好處]?

 

公式2：陳述句式

• [數字] + Reasons to + [行動]
• The Power of + [主題]
• [主題]: The Key to + [目標]

 

公式3：對比式

• [選項A] vs [選項B]: Which is Better?
• From [起點] to [終點]: How [主題] Changes Everything

 

Article 格式 Title 範例（配合2016 DSE Past Paper）：

 

✅ 優秀範例：

1. Why Workplace Communication is the Key to Mastering English
   • 清楚、有力、點出主題和好處
2. Three Powerful Reasons to Learn English at Work
   • 直接呼應題目要求（three reasons）
3. Transform Your English: Why the Workplace Beats the Classroom
   • 有對比、有衝擊力
4. Stop Studying, Start Working: The Secret to English Fluency
   • 大膽、引人注目

 

❌ 不好的範例：

• “My Views on Learning English”（太空泛，沒吸引力）
• “English Learning”（太短，沒資訊）
• “Some Reasons Why We Should Learn English Through Workplace Communication”（太長，不夠精煉）

 

Article 格式各部分寫作技巧詳解

 

 Article 格式 Introduction 寫法

Introduction 的目的：

• 引起讀者興趣（Hook）
• 介紹文章主題
• 說明寫作目的/立場

 

Introduction 寫法公式：

公式1：問題引入法

疑問句 + 簡短回答 + 點出主題

範例：”Have you ever wondered how to make your English learning more practical? The answer lies in workplace communication.”

 

公式2：對比法

傳統做法 + 缺點 vs 新方法 + 優點

範例：”While textbooks teach grammar rules, workplace communication teaches you how English really works in the real world.”

 

公式3：個人經驗法

分享個人故事/觀察 + 引出主題

範例：”After years of studying English in classrooms, I discovered that real workplace experience offers something textbooks cannot provide.”

Introduction 完整範例：

✅ 優秀範例：疑問句開頭

Have you ever wondered how to make your English learning more practical and effective? While textbooks and grammar drills certainly have their place in language education, there’s one method that stands out above all others: learning English through workplace communication. After years of studying English in traditional classrooms, I’ve discovered that real workplace experience offers something textbooks simply cannot provide. In this article, I’ll share three powerful reasons why workplace communication is the key to truly mastering English.

優點分析：

• ✅ Hook: 以問題引起讀者興趣和共鳴
• ✅ Background: 承認傳統方法的價值，再提出更好的方法
• ✅ Personal touch: 加入個人經驗建立可信度
• ✅ Thesis: 清楚說明文章立場
• ✅ Preview: 明確告訴讀者會提供三個理由
• ✅ 語氣: 親切但專業，完美符合英文 Article 格式
• ✅ 字數: 約80字，長度適中

 

❌ 不好的範例 ：太平淡

In this article, I am going to talk about learning English through workplace communication. I think it is very good and useful. There are many reasons why it is better than textbooks. I will tell you about three reasons.

問題分析：

• ❌ 開頭太平淡，沒有任何吸引力
• ❌ 用字太簡單（”very good”, “useful”）缺乏說服力
• ❌ “I am going to talk about” 太直白
• ❌ 沒有引起讀者興趣和共鳴
• ❌ 語氣太隨便，不符合 DSE Article 格式

 

 Article 格式 Body Paragraphs 寫法

Body Paragraphs 是 Article 格式的核心部分！這是你展示論點、提供證據、說服讀者的地方。

Body Paragraphs 的 PEEL 結構：

P – Point（論點）

• 清晰的主題句
• 一句話說明這段的重點

 

E – Explanation（解釋）

• 詳細解釋這個論點
• 說明為什麼這個論點重要

 

E – Example（例子）

• 提供具體例子
• 可以是個人經驗、統計數據、真實案例

 

L – Link（連結）

• 把連結回到主題
• 強調這個論點的重要性

 

Body Paragraph 完整範例：

✅ 優秀Article 範例 ：第一個論點（完整 PEEL 結構）

Firstly, workplace communication exposes you to authentic, real-world English that you will never find in textbooks. Unlike the carefully scripted dialogues in your English books, workplace conversations are spontaneous, dynamic, and reflect how English is actually used in professional settings. When you engage in workplace communication whether through summer internships, part-time jobs, or school work experience programmes, you encounter industry-specific vocabulary, professional email etiquette, and the subtle art of formal speaking that no textbook can fully capture. For instance, during my summer internship at a marketing firm, I learned terms like “deliverables,” “stakeholders,” and “actionable insights”, words that never appeared in my textbooks. I also discovered that writing professional emails requires a completely different tone from essay writing. Phrases like “I hope this email finds you well” and “Please let me know if you have any questions” became second nature to me. This authentic exposure helps you understand not just the language itself, but also the context, tone, and cultural nuances that make communication truly effective in real professional environments.

優點分析：

• ✅ P: 清晰的主題句（用粗體標示）
• ✅ E: 詳細解釋為什麼真實環境不同於課本
• ✅ E: 提供具體例子（marketing firm 的實習經驗）
• ✅ E: 例子非常具體（列出學到的詞彙和 phrases）
• ✅ L: 把連結回到主題，強調重要性
• ✅ 用 “Firstly” 清楚標示這是第一個論點
• ✅ 字數: 約150字，長度適中

 

 不好的Article 範例 ：一句超長 run-on sentence

I think learning English at work is better than learning from textbooks because you can learn many things and it is more interesting and you meet people and you use real English and it helps you get a job and employers like people who can speak English well and you become more confident and it is fun and educational.

問題分析：

• ❌ 整段只有一句超長句子
• ❌ 過度使用 “and” 連接
• ❌ 沒有分點論述
• ❌ 論點混亂，全部擠在一起
• ❌ 違反 DSE Article 格式的段落結構要求

 

Body Paragraphs 常用連接詞：

列舉論點：

• Firstly, … / Secondly, … / Thirdly, …
• To begin with, … / Furthermore, … / Finally, …
• The first reason is… / Another key point is… / Most importantly, …

 

補充論點：

• Moreover, …
• In addition, …
• Furthermore, …
• What’s more, …
• Additionally, …

 

提供例子：

• For instance, …
• For example, …
• To illustrate this, …
• A good example is…
• Consider the case of…

 

解釋說明：

• This is because…
• This means that…
• In other words, …
• To put it simply, …

 

3️⃣ Article 格式 Conclusion 寫法

Conclusion 是 Article 格式的最後印象！一個有力的 Conclusion 可以為你的文章畫上完美的句號。

Conclusion 的作用：

• 總結全文重點
• 呼籲讀者思考或行動
• 留下深刻印象
• 不引入新論點

 

Conclusion 寫作公式：

Summary（總結）→ Restate Thesis（重申立場）→ Call to Action（行動呼籲）→ Final Thought（最後想法）

Conclusion 完整範例：

✅ 優秀範例：總結+行動呼籲式

In conclusion, while traditional classroom learning methods certainly have their important role and merits, incorporating workplace communication into your English learning journey offers unmatched, transformative benefits that simply cannot be replicated in a classroom setting. As we have seen, workplace experience connects abstract language learning to concrete real-life situations, builds highly marketable professional skills that employers actively seek, and creates a dynamic, self-sustaining learning environment with built-in motivation and feedback. So why not actively seek out opportunities for workplace communication starting today? Whether it’s a part-time job at a local café, volunteer work with an international organization, or a formal school-organized work experience programme, take the plunge and immerse yourself in real English—your future self, your English skills, and your career prospects will all thank you for it!

優點分析：

• ✅ 用 “In conclusion” 清楚標示這是結論
• ✅ 承認傳統方法的價值（平衡觀點）
• ✅ 簡潔總結三個主要論點
• ✅ 用疑問句引出行動呼籲
• ✅ 提供具體可行的建議
• ✅ 結尾有力且鼓舞人心
• ✅ 字數: 約130字
• ✅ 優秀範例 2：展望未來式

 

To sum up, learning English through workplace communication is not just an alternative approach it is the future of language education. As our world becomes increasingly globalized and interconnected, the ability to communicate effectively in real professional settings will only grow in importance. Students who embrace workplace learning today will find themselves well-prepared for tomorrow’s challenges. The question is not whether you should try workplace communication, but rather when you will start. Don’t wait until graduation to discover the power of real-world English. Start exploring opportunities now, and watch your language skills soar to heights you never thought possible.

優點分析：

• ✅ 用 “To sum up” 標示結論
• ✅ 提升議題重要性
• ✅ 連結到更大的社會趨勢
• ✅ 製造緊迫感
• ✅ 以正面願景結束

 

❌ 不好的範例：只是重複

In conclusion, I talked about three reasons. First is real English. Second is confidence. Third is feedback. These are all good reasons. Workplace communication is good. You should do it. The end.

問題分析：

• ❌ 只是機械式重複論點
• ❌ 用字太簡單
• ❌ “The end” 非常不專業
• ❌ 沒有任何呼籲或展望

 

Conclusion 常用句式：

總結論點：

• In conclusion, …
• To sum up, …
• All in all, …
• To conclude, …

 

重申觀點：

• As we have seen, …
• This shows that…
• It is clear that…
• There is no doubt that…

 

行動呼籲：

• So why not…?
• I strongly encourage you to…
• Don’t hesitate to…
• It’s time to…
• Start today by…

 

展望未來：

• Looking ahead, …
• In the future, …
• Your future self will thank you…

 

 

2016 DSE 完整 5** Article 格式範例

以下是根據2016年 DSE English Paper 2 寫作的完整 DSE Article 格式範例：

題目回顧： Learning English through workplace communication. Write an article for your school magazine expressing your views. Give three reasons to support your views.

Why Workplace Communication is the Key to Mastering English

Three compelling reasons every student should know

Have you ever wondered how to make your English learning more practical and effective? While textbooks and grammar drills certainly have their place in language education, there’s one method that stands out above all others: learning English through workplace communication. After years of studying English in traditional classrooms, I’ve discovered that real workplace experience offers something textbooks simply cannot provide. In this article, I’ll share three powerful reasons why workplace communication is the key to truly mastering English.

Firstly, workplace communication exposes you to authentic, real-world English that you will never find in textbooks. Unlike the carefully scripted dialogues in your English books, workplace conversations are spontaneous, dynamic, and reflect how English is actually used in professional settings. When you engage in workplace communication—whether through summer internships, part-time jobs, or school work experience programmes—you encounter industry-specific vocabulary, professional email etiquette, and the subtle art of formal speaking that no textbook can fully capture. For instance, during my summer internship at a marketing firm, I learned terms like “deliverables,” “stakeholders,” and “actionable insights”—words that never appeared in my textbooks. I also discovered that writing professional emails requires a completely different tone from essay writing. Phrases like “I hope this email finds you well” and “Please let me know if you have any questions” became second nature to me. This authentic exposure helps you understand not just the language itself, but also the context, tone, and cultural nuances that make communication truly effective in real professional environments.

Secondly, workplace communication builds practical skills that dramatically boost your confidence and future employability. According to a recent survey conducted by the Hong Kong Institute of Human Resources, 78% of employers value communication skills over academic qualifications when hiring fresh graduates. This statistic highlights a crucial reality: exam results alone are not enough in today’s competitive job market. By learning through workplace communication, you develop essential skills like presenting ideas clearly in meetings, negotiating with clients confidently, handling international phone calls without panic, and writing persuasive business proposals. I experienced this transformation firsthand during my three-month internship at a local bookshop. Initially, I was terrified of speaking English during team discussions and would often remain silent even when I had good ideas. However, after just six weeks of daily practice, I found myself confidently presenting project ideas to senior managers and even leading a book club discussion with foreign customers. This kind of transformation—from hesitant student to confident communicator—would have been impossible through textbook exercises alone. Real workplace interaction forces you to step out of your comfort zone and develop genuine communication competence.

Thirdly, workplace communication provides immediate feedback and natural motivation that textbooks simply cannot offer. Think about it: when you complete a textbook exercise, you might wait days or even weeks for your teacher to mark it and return it to you. But in a workplace setting, feedback is instant and meaningful. If your email instructions are unclear, your colleague will ask for clarification immediately. If your presentation lacks structure, you will see confusion in your audience’s faces right away. This real-time feedback creates a powerful learning loop that accelerates improvement dramatically. Moreover, workplace mistakes have real consequences—a poorly written email might delay an important project, or unclear instructions might confuse customers and affect sales. While this might sound stressful, it actually creates strong motivation to improve. When your English directly affects your work performance and your team’s success, you naturally become more careful, more attentive, and ultimately, a better learner. This combination of immediate feedback and genuine motivation makes workplace communication one of the most effective ways to master English quickly and thoroughly.

In conclusion, while traditional classroom learning methods certainly have their important role and merits, incorporating workplace communication into your English learning journey offers unmatched, transformative benefits that simply cannot be replicated in a classroom setting. As we have seen, workplace experience connects abstract language learning to concrete real-life situations, builds highly marketable professional skills that employers actively seek, and creates a dynamic, self-sustaining learning environment with built-in motivation and feedback. So why not actively seek out opportunities for workplace communication starting today? Whether it’s a part-time job at a local café, volunteer work with an international organization, or a formal school-organized work experience programme, take the plunge and immerse yourself in real English—your future self, your English skills, and your career prospects will all thank you for it!

 

這篇 DSE Article 格式範例的優點分析

✅ 格式完整（符合所有 DSE Article 格式要求）

Title 標題

• ✅ 清晰有力，用疑問句式吸引注意
• ✅ 長度適中（10個字）
• ✅ 每個主要單字都大寫

 

Subheading 副標題

• ✅ 補充資訊，直接呼應題目要求（three reasons）
• ✅ 針對目標讀者（every student）

 

Introduction 引言段

• ✅ Hook：以問題開頭引起興趣
• ✅ Background：承認傳統方法，提出更好方法
• ✅ Thesis：清楚立場
• ✅ Preview：預告三個理由
• ✅ 約80字，長度適中

 

Body Paragraphs 主體段落

• ✅ 三個獨立段落，每個論點清晰
• ✅ 用 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 標示
• ✅ 每段都有完整 PEEL 結構
• ✅ 每段約150-160字，長度均衡

 

Conclusion 總結段

• ✅ 用 “In conclusion” 標示
• ✅ 簡潔總結三個論點
• ✅ 行動呼籲
• ✅ 有力結尾
• ✅ 約130字

 

✅ 嚴格遵從題目要求

1. “Write an article for your school magazine”
   • ✅ 用了適合校刊的語氣（親切但專業）
   • ✅ 有完整的 Article 格式
2. “expressing your views”
   • ✅ 清楚表達立場
   • ✅ 用第一人稱分享個人經驗和觀點
3. “Give three reasons to support your views”
   • ✅ Reason 1: Authentic, real-world English
   • ✅ Reason 2: Builds practical skills and confidence
   • ✅ Reason 3: Immediate feedback and motivation

 

✅ 語言運用出色

詞彙豐富：

• 高階詞彙：authentic, spontaneous, dynamic, competency, transformation
• 專業術語：deliverables, stakeholders, actionable insights
• 變化表達：”key” / “crucial” / “essential”

 

句式多樣：

• 疑問句開頭
• 長句短句結合
• 複合句和簡單句交替

 

連接詞運用：

• 列舉：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
• 補充：Moreover, Furthermore
• 例子：For instance
• 總結：In conclusion

 

✅ 論據有說服力

每個論點都有：

• ✅ 清晰主題句
• ✅ 詳細解釋
• ✅ 具體例子（個人經驗/數據）
• ✅ 有力的 Link

 

Article 格式常見錯誤與解決方法

 

❌ 錯誤 1：忽略題目要求

問題： 看到 “Article” 就以為可以隨便寫，沒注意題目具體要求

實例：

• 題目要求 “Give three reasons”，但只寫了兩個理由
• 題目要求 “expressing your views”，但寫成純資訊性文章

解決方法： ✅ 審題三步驟：

1. 圈出關鍵字（對象、要求、數量）
2. 列出檢查清單
3. 寫完後對照題目檢查

 

❌ 錯誤 2：格式不完整

問題： 漏掉 Article 格式的必要元素

常見遺漏：

• 沒有 Title
• Title 沒有大寫
• 段落沒有分隔

 

❌ 錯誤 3：語氣不當

太隨便的例子：

Hey guys! So like, I wanna talk about why working is super cool for your English, ya know?

問題：

• “Hey guys” – 太隨便
• “wanna” – 縮寫不適合
• “super cool” – 太主觀不專業

 

❌ 錯誤 4：段落結構混亂

錯誤範例：

Workplace English is good. You learn real English. Textbooks are boring. You also get confidence. Employers like it.

問題：

• 所有論點擠在一段
• 沒有主題句
• 邏輯跳躍

解決方法： ✅ 使用 PEEL 結構 ✅ 每個論點獨立成段 ✅ 用 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 清楚標示

 

❌ 錯誤 5：論據不夠具體

空泛範例：

Workplace communication is good for learning English. It helps you improve.

問題：

• “good”, “helps” – 太籠統
• 沒有具體例子

具體範例：

During my summer internship at a marketing firm, I learned professional terms like “deliverables,” “stakeholders,” and “actionable insights”—words that never appeared in my textbooks.

DSE Article 格式高分技巧總結

🌟 技巧 1：標題要搶眼

Title 黃金法則：

• ✅ 8-12個字最理想
• ✅ 每個主要單字大寫
• ✅ 用疑問句 / 數字 / 對比 / 動詞

 

🌟 技巧 2：Introduction 要 Hook 讀者

Hook 技巧：

• 疑問句：Have you ever…?
• 統計：Did you know that…?
• 情境：Imagine two students…
• 故事：Last summer, I experienced…

 

🌟 技巧 3：善用連接詞

• 列舉：Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly
• 補充：Moreover, Furthermore
• 例子：For instance, For example
• 總結：In conclusion, To sum up

 

🌟 技巧 4：每段用 PEEL 結構

• P – Point（論點）
• E – Explanation（解釋）
• E – Example（例子）
• L – Link（連結）

 

🌟 技巧 5：語氣要適中

• ✅ 親切但不隨便
• ✅ 專業但不古板
• ✅ 有個人風格但不口語化

 

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